Well it's not that, for the most part I wont be working on this project anymore (I might just make it free at this point). I want to make more VN just dont have the time for it.
My biggest issues would have to be the spelling and grammar. There were a lot of mistakes which will take you out of the story. The game was pretty easy to get the good ending. Maybe the next will add more depth and challenge. The game goes by really quickly. While you aren't charging much, I would have hoped the spelling and grammar mistakes would have been caught before it was released to the public. Perhaps you can make an updated version?
The general feel of the game is enjoyable, though little replay value. I think if you get more practice in, it will help the over all quality of future games. I read you completed this in 6 weeks, which inspired me to try the same. So your game made me want to make one of my own.
Two thing this game has going for it, to me, would be it's Yaoi. Which is something I don't see much of. And it's with a nonhuman character. When you see humans every where, it's nice to see something that goes against the flow.
Hopefully you'll find my comments helpful for any future projects.
Thank you for your reply it was very helpful ^^ I'm working on 2 but this time I'm writing it out so the grammar is better and working on making more paths to take.
I do plan on updating This eventually but with school it makes it hard to find the time so i'm waiting for the summer thank you for begin patient with me
P.s I agree there aren't many nonhumans in games thats why i'm trying to keep it nonhuman (aside from the player of course)
to be fair not only is this my first time doing anything like this i had it checked 5 times by one person and did everything else myself but thank you for the comment i'll try to do better on the next episode that im working on now
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im guessing this is dead and we wont see anything new from this user
Well it's not that, for the most part I wont be working on this project anymore (I might just make it free at this point). I want to make more VN just dont have the time for it.
My biggest issues would have to be the spelling and grammar. There were a lot of mistakes which will take you out of the story. The game was pretty easy to get the good ending. Maybe the next will add more depth and challenge. The game goes by really quickly. While you aren't charging much, I would have hoped the spelling and grammar mistakes would have been caught before it was released to the public. Perhaps you can make an updated version?
The general feel of the game is enjoyable, though little replay value. I think if you get more practice in, it will help the over all quality of future games. I read you completed this in 6 weeks, which inspired me to try the same. So your game made me want to make one of my own.
Two thing this game has going for it, to me, would be it's Yaoi. Which is something I don't see much of. And it's with a nonhuman character. When you see humans every where, it's nice to see something that goes against the flow.
Hopefully you'll find my comments helpful for any future projects.
Thank you for your reply it was very helpful ^^ I'm working on 2 but this time I'm writing it out so the grammar is better and working on making more paths to take.
I do plan on updating This eventually but with school it makes it hard to find the time so i'm waiting for the summer thank you for begin patient with me
P.s I agree there aren't many nonhumans in games thats why i'm trying to keep it nonhuman (aside from the player of course)
to be fair not only is this my first time doing anything like this i had it checked 5 times by one person and did everything else myself but thank you for the comment i'll try to do better on the next episode that im working on now